英语作文(汇编10篇)
在学习、工作或生活中,说到作文,大家肯定都不陌生吧,通过作文可以把我们那些零零散散的思想,聚集在一块。那么你有了解过作文吗?下面是小编精心整理的英语作文10篇,仅供参考,希望能够帮助到大家。
英语作文 篇1
亲爱的小朋友们,恭喜你们选择了《小马俱乐部历险记》这部佳作!
这本书既充满了团结、友爱、勇敢、智慧、爱心、坚韧等正能量,又是通过爱马、养马、骑马、人与马的情感互动等一系列日常生活中的细节表现出来,而且是通过一个10岁女孩的眼睛与心灵的感知表现的,因而充满纯真自然又富有童趣。读完此书,你们当然会学到大量的有关骑马与马儿的知识,了解澳大利亚小学生生活的一个侧面,更能在不知不觉中磨炼自己的性格,有利于健康成长。
对于那些热爱文学、热爱写作的同学,从本书里学到的会更多。日常生活常常是琐屑而乏味的,写日记怎么才不沦为记流水账,怎么选取值得记录的生活片段,才能把日常生活琐事写得活灵活现、妙趣横生;日常生活中的“口水话”在本书中怎样变成了文学语言;怎么才能够既要保持日记的真实性,又要具有文学性,具有艺术感染力——这些都很值得注意,值得熟读深思、细心揣摩。
对于中学生来说,更是学习当代英语的鲜活教材,本书作者是世界级的教育工作者,因而该书是面向全世界的少年儿童的,青少年必定要学习书中的语言表达,所以该书的英语既生动活泼,又规范地道,所使用的语言口里说出来没人会笑你文绉绉的,写成作文也没人会说这是口水话。
初中生可以作为阅读材料,巩固所学的词汇句型语法惯用法,最好是读熟,书中的大量句子可以脱口而出;高中及大学低年级学生可以作为口语和写作教材,先看看一段中文,然后试着口头叙述或笔头写一下那个场景,最后看看作者是怎么遣词造句表现该场景的,还要揣摩作者为何要那样写。坚持一年,必然大有长进。
当然啦,本书也是初学翻译者的实战演练场,英译汉、汉译英都很好;战争是最好的军校!坚持译完全书试试?
本书的特色,既是原著英文版的特色,也是这部中文版的特色。
一、整体特色
本书特色若用一个词概括,就是“真实自然”,具体表现为以下几个方面:
1、真实自然的生活画面;
2、点到即止的景物描写;
3、曲折有致的故事叙述;
4、真切细致的心理刻画;
5、任情率真的人物个性;
6、朴实真挚的情感流露;
7、平实淡远的鲜活口语。
8、浑然天成的整体效果。
本书是日记体小说,主人公是一个9——10岁的女孩,相当于我国3——4年级学生,她记下的是自己的心路历程,因而其写法“我手写我口,我手写我心”,心里怎么想、口里怎么说,下笔就怎么写,全书读起来一点儿刻意为文或雕琢痕迹也没有,描写的环境、景物当然也是主人公眼里所见之物,所见、所想、所写都完全符合该年龄段一般儿童的心理认知与表达程度。写景的“佳词美句”也只有这么一句:
太阳升起在水晶般清亮的湖水上面,湖水简直就像是一面玻璃!
请停下来想一想,这里的“玻璃”能改成“镜子”吗?为什么?我们不是常常看见“水平如镜”,“湖水就像一面镜子”这样的句子吗?
这里当然只能用“玻璃”而不用“镜子”!一是因为这女孩“不爱红装爱马装”,她虽然也很爱美,还要给马儿梳妆打扮,给马儿穿新衣戴饰品,自己平时却不爱梳妆打扮,极少用镜子,当然就不容易想起“镜子”;再说当时是一大早到的野外湖边去骑马,心情激动、惊喜痴迷,用“镜子”与她的个性特征与心理状态都不合。二是因为镜子与玻璃虽然都倒映着天光云影,但湖水清澈透明,玻璃也是透明的,镜子却不透明不像湖水。
点到即止,恰到好处!若超过这个程度,那就显得假了,恐怕就不像是小学生写给自己看的日记了。
写景虽简,故事的叙述则是波澜起伏,曲折有致,主人公的心情也是忧(连续大雨),悲(马儿查理之死)——喜(救回了马儿,天晴骑马)——大喜(参加俱乐部训练,得奖)——忧(自己的马儿有病)——喜(找到了理想的新马儿)——大喜或狂喜(大型马术比赛得奖)——忧(新马儿表现反常)——恐惧(新马儿可能有严重问题,背后可能藏着重大的秘密,其结局只有死路一条,主人公或许再也骑不成马儿了)!往往是一波刚平,另一波又起,吸引着读者一口气读下去,而且因其叙述语言真切自然,读者就像处于主人公的生活之中,随着主人公的喜怒哀乐一步步走下去,根本不觉得是在读小说。
主人公艾比纯朴善良、任情率真,但并非任性妄为、我行我素,其实她很懂事,肯想办法,与人为善,待人真诚、爱恨忧喜,毫不掩饰。
二、语言特色
本书的语言,清新鲜活、简单平实(因为必须符合人物身份),属于经过提炼的口语体,准确、鲜明、生动、简洁,没有生僻的词语,也没有长、难句,给人以真实自然的感觉,好像澳大利亚的儿童平时就是这么说话的,其实当然不是。除了“pig root(尥蹶子)”这个词语是澳大利亚英语中的.方言,其他的词句都是英语世界中通用的,而且用法都符合英语的语法规范(狄更斯、海明威等大师的作品中也有病句),相当于英语中的“普通话”,因而是学生的作文和口语中都可以用的。作者很注意行文的节奏,绝没有单调、冗长乏味的叙述或议论,都是点到即止,一笔带过,又接着讲故事,或是吐露心曲。用语虽然简单,但那些骑马时、尤其是比赛中的场面描写依然扣人心弦,并且与主人公的心理刻画交织于一体,让读者也身临其境、感同身受,与主人公忧乐与共,悲喜同心,紧紧牵着读者的心弦。
中文版完全体现上述特征,用的是规范的现代汉语普通话,也只用了“尥蹶子”这么一个方言词,并且加了注释,以防有些同学不懂该词。
简言之,其语言风格应为平实淡远,浑然天成。
平实,平易实在,犹如我们日常中经常说的那些词句。不仅没有马克?吐温那样的夸张写法,就连狄更斯那样的夸张都没有;淡远,淡淡的清香悠远绵长,令人回味,犹如一杯绿茶。没有战争、惊险、犯罪小说里那样麻辣的重口味,主人公极度兴奋时才用了下面这个最具“文学性”的句子:
湖水中骑马飞奔是我这一生中最精彩的一幕!无论如何也想象不出的精彩!!!
浑然天成,是指本书的词句都很浅易平常,单个的词句极难找到出彩的“佳词美句”或“格言警句”,你也看不到作者用了什么文学技巧,但是这些词句都用得恰到好处,构成的整体效果便具有强烈的艺术感染力,使读者不知不觉地走进主人公的内心世界,与她同呼吸,共命运,赞赏她,牵挂她。所谓“清水出芙蓉,天然去雕饰”,“华丽从朴素中来”,“最高的技巧即无技巧”——说的就是这种情况吧?
梨子的滋味,吃了才知。读书也一样。
亲爱的小朋友们,再次恭喜你们能读到这样的佳作。
英语作文 篇2
一、研究背景
在实际教学中,我们发现传统的文科教学,在作文(包括英语作文)的批改上盛行着两种方法:一是教师用刺眼的红笔进行“√”和“×”批阅,最后用一两句不痛不痒的话稍作点评;另一种则是教师经常对学生的作文进行面批。对于前者,几乎所有人(包括进行批改的教师)都认为其效果甚微,这种简单但过于“粗放”的方式显然已跟不上当今的英语教学;但对于后者,在肯定其效果以及教师的敬业心之时,我们不得不为那超负荷的工作量给教师身心带来的巨大压力而担心,同时也为他们在外语教育和教学时间分配上的合理性感到忧虑。毫无疑问,作文批改已成为英语教师和其他文科教师最耗时和最疲惫的工作。而且,即使付出了许多时间和精力,其反馈效果还是不太理想,使得很多学生学了十多年的英语,却拿不出一篇通顺像样的作文。为此,笔者试图从传承与创新的角度,提出几种想法,以求教于大方。
二、研究的内容和方法
教师的批改和反馈不仅要给学生的作文一个等级或者分数,还要作出一种过程评价。只有充分体会到了写作和反馈的过程,学生才能始终处于一种主动的`学习之中,反馈的效果才会更加趋向于合理化和理想化。因为学生写作是一个过程,写作后的反馈是写作过程的延续,学生写作能力的提高与否同教师的反馈效果密切相关。由此可见,有效批改和反馈的作用不言而喻。那么,如何对学生的作文进行有效的批改和反馈呢?
1. 创造人性化的反馈环境,兼顾不同学生的写作水平
所谓创造人性化的反馈环境是指教师应该站在学生的立场上,贴近每位学生的兴趣、爱好和个性特长因材施“评”。这不仅可以缓解学生思想上的压力,还可以激发学生的写作兴趣。因此,对于写作基础较好的学生除了肯定之外还要给出改进意见;对于写作基础较差的学生,则应采取鼓励与指导相结合的方式——使用激励性的语言树立其自信心,并用商量的口气予以指导。
(1)当堂批改
学生刚写好作文,对题目的理解、构思、结构、用词造句等都还记忆犹新,若此时教师趁热打铁,当堂指导学生进行批改,就能产生很好的批改效果。如:以“How to Build a Harmonious Society?”为例,笔者根据对学生的了解,制订了如下的当堂批改方案。分别选出好、中、差各一篇作文(不署名且事先不告诉学生各篇作文的等级),通过教室投影放映给全班学生阅读,然后通过电脑显示提供评价标准:作者的观点是否明确;各段是否服务于该观点;段落间及段与段的连接是否合理、流畅;结尾是否做到了首尾呼应或深化主题,或提出了解决问题的建议等。再让学生对照标准,评价这三篇作文。这样做的目的在于让学生明白作文评分要从内容(思想和材料)、语言和结构三方面入手。接着要求学生对这三篇作文作总体反馈。学生的反馈与实际情况可能大相径庭,不过教师恰好可以就这点进行针对性的分析。然后,教师再进行示范性的分析,分别指出三篇课堂习作中的优缺点。这样,不同层次的学生都有了参照,都有了发展的空间,也便于学生对自己的作文有更为深入的了解。
(2)彩色批改
传统的做法是教师用红笔批改学生作文中的错误,然后给出分数。红笔批阅的内容也就是错误的内容。殊不知,学生的心理是害怕红色,甚至抵制红色的。既然这样,那何不换位思考一下呢? 不妨试着和学生进行沟通,使用一些学生认可的方法进行批改。有些教师在批改学生作文时,尝试用绿色荧光笔画出学生习作中的好词好句,用紫色画出学生在时态和搭配等方面的错误。紫色的批改常侧重在句子层面的错误上,更易于学生进行改错和加强记忆。实践证明,用除红色外的彩笔进行修改,不会对学生造成视觉上的冲击,可以缓解红色的过度“警示作用”对学生自信的打击。所以,彩色批改法不仅不伤害学生的自尊,而且还使教师和学生摆脱了审美疲劳。这种批改方法也可用于学生的相互批改中。
(3)符号批改
根据研究,教师的批改中有相当一部分属于“鸡肋”,因为这些所谓的“错误”仅仅是与教师的风格不太吻合而已。如此“食而无味”的“鸡肋”不仅不能提高学生的写作水平,还有可能因此而改变了学生原想表达的意思。符号批改的出现,既减轻了教师的负担,又给学生提供了思考的余地。学生由接受教师的既定观点变成了主动进行探究性的学习,使学生真正成为写作的受益者。
英语作文 篇3
With the destruction of human beings, the pollution of industrial enterprises and the destruction of the natural environment, many birds have lost their homes, animals have been killed in large Numbers, and the creatures in the water have died in large quantities. Every day the animals live in fear, fearing that bad luck will happen to them. The chairman of the whale, the chairman of the lion, and the chairman of the eagle are very anxious.
Finally one day, the lion and the eagle, whales together, after some plot, a loud roar together, telepathic sound wave respectively convey the information to the ground, the sky and the sea, the animals received signal quickly rushed to the sea side for the meeting.
The animals have been talking about: what are you doing at the meeting today? Yeah, it's a mystery.
The lion chairman finally spoke: cough, silence! Then the whole scene became silent. Seriously, chairman of the lion: the call everyone to come because to tell you a good news, that is what we can leave this planet, we are going to go to the place where is full of vitality and beauty of the world, there will be no pollution, no hunting! The animals clap their hands in excitement, some old people are low and thoughtful, some shake their heads and sigh.
Then the elephant secretary said: of course, we need to make a ship to other planet, about five days or so, you better get materials, making craft, after two days we will set start here!
The action must be united and concerted efforts to make the ship good in the shortest time. The eagle said
Whale chairman eager say: everyone elected representatives of several smart, as the ship manufacturing work, later I will send you across the sea of a piece of flat land, there are plenty of materials.
To the other side of the sea, the ship's chief designer ninja turtle — Michelo made a drawing for each animal, so that everyone could follow the above instructions.
Elephants are responsible for transporting water and building underground ocean rooms and bathing rooms. The mole is responsible for digging up oil and storing energy for the spacecraft. The gorilla is responsible for cutting down trees and decorating ships for the birds to inhabit. The eagle was responsible for taking steel from the steel plant and making the shell of the ship. The teenage mutant ninja was responsible for painting the paint. The monkey is responsible for picking fruit and cooking food. The grizzlies are responsible for pulling weeds and radishes to feed the herbivores, and some small animals bring the food they have stored in their homes, and they are not happy about it
Why, there is a spaceship here, it is so beautiful! "Exclaimed one of the felling workers. He just wanted to check it out at , and he was caught by the eagle: the hateful, get out of here! Why should I leave? I just want to go in and have a look, no harm. Hum, the devil believe, it is because of you to cut down, destroy environment, we are forced to leave here, wait and see, have you good-looking! Huh? We look good? Wait another 10,000 years! The woodcutter then ran away.
The eagle called for the lion and the blue whale. What happened? The blue whale asked the hawk. Oh, no, we're going to go. There was a lumberjack who discovered our secret. He must be running back to tell someone about it now. "Said the eagle anxiously. The lion went on and said, hurry up and set off immediately! The teacher of the teenage mutant ninja turtle, sprint, came to the three chairmen and said, "wait a minute. Let's take a second look at the ancient earth that the grandparents grew up in." These days old people are all tea and rice, after all to this earth affection is deep! Sprint, you're crazy! Man knows that this thing will stop us.
The whole world knows about it. At this moment, the elephant is leisurely and leisurely in the bath room bubble bath, blue whale say: what is the responsibility, rice bright and cheerful chilo's craft is so bad, even airstream don't know to hide. The blue whale looked up and saw that the elephant was pressing it. Damn it! Jump out of me!
The elephant just jumped to the side and heard a scream, you crushed me! Damn it! The elephant is not good to say sorry to the little turtle, I'm sorry to say that it jumped down to the next port
Look! Very little penguin in the game in the icehouse sledding, ice skating, polar bears are homemade ice lolly, gorillas in the weight room game who is the real hercules, little bear, dog, cat, Mickey Mouse and rabbit playing pyramid them to come at the end of the life is full of endless longing.
On the contrary, the old people are not so happy, they are very reluctant to the former piece of land, they shed tears quietly.
At the same time, humans on earth had the woodcutter take them to where they had seen the ship. But the land was empty and there was nothing. But they never thought that the animals were eating a big meal at the alien's home, because they had to live in peace with aliens
Since then, the human race has paid a heavy price: no more birds chirping, no small animals running happily in the forest, no fish to play with. Human beings feel that life is not fun.
英语作文 篇4
While, a few years in the past, my hometown changes a lot! Look, the whole city is just like a big forest, streets clean, no dust, trees and flowers in full bloom, the air was filled with the fresh taste, we are living in a world of green.
In addition to the beauty of environment, modern technology has also advanced, all kinds of robot will deal with all kinds of garbage, waste water, waste gas, waste.
I saw hometown is so beautiful, mind the hometown ten years ago: although the high-rise buildings, road spacious, but the green is poor, little road lined with trees, wind, dust float in the sky, the colorful plastic bags everywhere, alas, the air is terrible.
When people do not take the environmental protection, do not care for the environment around you. They said we are a small community garden, small garden center has a small pool of water, has just completed, the water on the bottom, it kept many goldfish, but people always throw plastic bags, when viewing GuaGuoPi, branches in the water, over time, small pools of water turbidity, people pass by is wu wear the nose, the fish are dead, that are the result of the people do not care for the environment.
People realize the important of protecting the environment. Little by little, began to take good care of the environment, with actions build communities, to protect their homes
英语作文 篇5
GoodMorning / Afternoon, My dear teachers
My nameis Wu Yi-uan. I am 11 years old, and I am a fifth grade student.
I have many hobbies. I like drawing and I can drawvery well, which get a lot of praise from my teachers and friends. I likesports, such as dancing, skating, biking and playing badminton. I often play badmintonwith my sisters and we have a great fun together. I love music, especially thepop music, which makes me feel rela-. I love English, too. I hope I can travelall over the world one day.
I have manyfriends. I often study and play with Ke Jingqi and Zhu Si huai. Sometimes, wego to bookstore or supermarket together. We are so happy when we are together. Ilove my friends and they love me, too.
That'sall! Thank you for your attention.
英语作文 篇6
I saw a chemical factory pouring the waste water into the river.The river was very dirty.The fishes and animals died because of the pollution.It also polluted the flowers and grass near the river.
I think we should protect the environment.I think the government can do something useful to stop the pollution and protect the environment.
英语作文 篇7
My Hobby
I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.
One of my favorite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xun, I come back to the old time of China.
英语作文 篇8
Water is very important to us. If you don’t have water for three days, you will die. We can use water for flowers, swimming, washing and many different things. We use it to cook, make electricity, p
Water is very important to us. If you don’t have water for three days, you will die. We can use water for flowers, swimming, washing and many different things. We use it to cook, make electricity, put out fires and so on. We use millions of liters of water every day.
Do you know how does the water come to your home? It travels through water pipes. Some are long and wide but some are short and narrow. Then the water travels through the water pipes to the reservoirs. Then it travels through the water pipes to the river and to the special factories (we call water plants) that purify the water. When the water is purified, we can drink it. Please don’t leave garbage in the water on which we line, and keep the water clean.
英语作文 篇9
Facing the first spring breeze, the roadside opened the first spring flowers, it seems to be a spring messenger, tell us: spring is coming!
Spring came, and with a light step, it flew over the grass, where the grass was green; It flew over the garden, and the flowers there opened; It flew over the willows, and the swallows called; Wherever it has been, it is full of life. Spring returns to the earth, all things recover. I love beautiful spring.
Spring is coming, and spring is colorful. The peach blossom in March is fragrant and colourful, the red is like the morning sun, pink is like the heart of the people in spring. Rippling river, accompanied by melting snow in the winter, like a roll of the silver cord to the distance, with the flowers as the spring, the river waves coming in, in the spring, send out a golden light. I love beautiful spring.
In the spring, colorful kites are bathed in sunshine, and the eagles are flying. Aircraft with modern scientific and technological civilization; It's also two meters long, a meter wide, and a little oversized jellyfish... In a word, there are all kinds of things. On the green grass ground, there are naughty children running on it. They are wearing willow twigs made of willow twigs. Their hands are pulling on the string of kites in the sky, and the corners of their mouths are smiling. I love beautiful spring.
Against the first spring breeze blowing, slowly it green grass blowing, blowing drunk flower, blow away the severe winter freezing cold, blowing the little white clouds, blowing the warmth, blowing the spring to our infinite passion. It tells us that spring is coming.
英语作文 篇10
Animals are our friends。But how to protect them? government is working to protect all animals in danger,and has made lots of plans to save animals。 On the other hand, we shouldn’t eat wild animals。We should keep them away from our dinner。 That way,there will not be wild animals on sale。 I think the hunters and killers will become fewer and fewer。
Last, we should protect the environment。We should stop people from cutting trees down。 Without trees, wild animals will lose their home。 And we will lose our animal friends。 All of us should try our best to protect animals。
We need to protect animals better。We should give them fresh water to drink。We should make the forests bigger for animals in danger to live in。We should advice people not to kill animals beacause they are our friends!
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